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Forever Going

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End to end, citywide, he limps.
True story. I see him often.

Writing a story in six words is a lot harder than it seems. I chose this one because it is a true story. I wrote many others before coming to this one, many of them dark. I wanted to stay away from a dark story though. I wanted something more uplifting, although this one, I think, ended up being a little ambiguous.

I don't like the title.

=DailyLitDeviations' Six Word Story Contest.

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3wyl's avatar
Interesting...

I think the title works well with this piece... or, at least, we immediately get the picture with "End to end", which reflects the "Forever Going" part.

I like the phrasing and how you've managed to say a lot... I mean, we raise questions within ourselves about this person and yet we're not given much of anything, as a result.

Good stuff. :thumbsup: